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You kind of seemed depressed. Did you write this about cody or something cuz that's what it sounds like. Anyway, I don't know what it is about this song but ...

Thanx...I really enjoyed writing it...thanx everybody who critted this story! Love all you guys a bunch.

So were you just like trying to send it back to me in a private message and posted it instead? I'm not mad so just don't worry about it.

Just like I said in the other one...good job. I agree with what mysterywriter said about the lines...I liked them too.

LOL! Yeah poor polar bears. LOL! I think I ought to give myself a cookie. Anybody else want one?

That is a good idea. Thanx lotz. I was thanking about maybe a prequel or something...or better yet...maybe Jessie's family got her mixed up with someone. That would be soooooo ...

In my opinion you did very well on this..I like the way you described everything. I agree with Griffinkeeper on the suggestions too. I can't wait to read more of ...

Cool! Can't wait!

Thanx...yeah it was kind of short and I really didn't care for it too much until the end of course...I'm sorry to say but the story is almost over. I ...

I really liked it too. It's funny how it sounds like something i would write when I'm not doing 18th century stuff. Can't wait to hear more!

To you....

I dunno...did he mean last weekend or this weekend? Cuz I haven't been on in a couple of days so I don't know what's going on either. Hey I should ...

I really liked it too..and love your name. I can't wait to hear more of your fact i look forward to it. It actually gave me an idea for a ...

It takes place in the 18th Century

Wow! I loved it a bunch.